George
1 min readJun 4, 2019

Really practical advice! Thanks.

How would you write in a capturing way in a referral to the beforehand sentence? Eliminating the “that, it, this” often sounds better, but is challenging.

Examples:

I got hung up because I wanted to understand the solution before starting. But that’s not how nature works.

Responsibility to care for another person two times a week. That’s what you contribute in exchange for basic income.

The repetition is necessary to keep the sentence short.

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